Wow - how badly can you make an advert???

Saigon

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sh1t can't be a spelling mistake, can it? You would have to choose to insert the 1, thinking the option really was called paddle ****.
Otherwise, you'd have to write a word with an f in it?
Or have I got this backwards? I just can't believe that ......... I give up. Fortunately, I just can't get inside this guy's head. For fear I may not be
able to get out again! :eek:
In the original description he didn't insert the 1, that was substituted later in this thread. So originally he omitted the f from shift.
 

midlifecrisis

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I like punctuation. It helps the reader understand where a sentence finishes, or where the next clause starts. Instead, the description is one mass of words without any clue as to what is being said.

Also picture framing; we have plenty of foreground and 90% of car in the background. Pictures are worth a 1000 words, here we have 900.
Consider moving the car to a better location. A contrasting background can help improve the appearance of your car's colour and presence. Digital photography allows the seller to take many different shots but following review, only use one for each angle.

Clearly, the vendor will struggle to achieve 5 figures with this one.